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Trip to "ORANA WILDLIFE PARK"

Ivan Notario
180 Waterloo Road
Christchurch

Orana Wildlife Park

Dear Sir/Madam

Hello, my name is Ivan this is about our trip to ORANA WILDLIFE PARK.

As soon as we got on the bus, I was excited about what animals what we could see, from there.

After 11-15 minutes of driving finally, we've arrived at the zoo.As soon as we entered the zoo, I saw a porcupine peeking at the rocks, as they say at the t.v. shows it was prickly and have long spines. But behind the porcupine cage theirs more animals! hiding the meerkats. They are in groups and always standing why though?After a long walk, it was morning tea already! During our morning tea, Carl and I have a walk and then we saw some lemurs in groups jumping and running on the ropes.After a good morning tea, we went to the kea's cage we saw the lady feeding them they were very playful as they were called the clown of the mountains.After an enjoyable trip to the kea's cage, we went to the nocturnal bird's nest with two legs, small flaps of wings the kiwi! As we entered it was dark and creepy as soon as we saw the Kiwi's it paid off.After we visited the kiwi we went to the king of the jungle's cage, the lion.I was the thrilled of the coolness of the lion it was so humongous.It was awesome.
I wish I could visit them another day.Next is the tiger with the fearsome black and orange stripes.Then after the visit to the tiger, we got back to the zoo school and eat our lunch.After a nice good lunch, we went to the rhinos cage and talk about them and their horns.After a few walks, we saw different types of Buffalo and Waterbucks but they are not really much a thrill.So we go to the runners of the wild, Cheetahs they were awesome.then the gorillas and the giraffes are pretty cool but we need to go back to school so we packed our thing's up and go.I would really say it was an awesome trip to the zoo.
   

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