I was a pupil in Uru MÄnuka and this blog is where I shared my learning.
Hi Ivan, I liked how you included a picture of your kite. It is great that the picture is clear and you can clearly see the design on the kite. I think you can improve by checking your sentences make sense, because some of them don't make any sense.
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Hi Ivan, I liked how you included a picture of your kite. It is great that the picture is clear and you can clearly see the design on the kite. I think you can improve by checking your sentences make sense, because some of them don't make any sense.
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